Don’t stop now, Clarence! It’ll just keep getting better and better! And this first haiku is a delightful promise of things to come. The phrase “Sunlight dancing in air” is elegant, and the final line is a charming and “explosive” surprise! Well done, my new friend.
PrairieChat 
Don’t stop now, Clarence! It’ll just keep getting better and better! And this first haiku is a delightful promise of things to come. The phrase “Sunlight dancing in air” is elegant, and the final line is a charming and “explosive” surprise! Well done, my new friend.
Ron — http://randalane.wordpress.com