Ronavan’s Weekly Challenge 58 – Rise Save

night

Loons Sing

birds wake at sunrise
in joyful jubilation
loon’s song saved for night

The two sentences should read as;

Birds wake at sunrise in joyful jubilation
In joyful jubilation, loon’s song saved for night

– Clarence Holm

https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/08/17/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-58-rise-save/

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