August 17, 2015 by PrairieChat

Ronavan’s Weekly Challenge 58 – Rise Save

Loons Sing

birds wake at sunrise
in joyful jubilation
loon’s song saved for night

The two sentences should read as;

Birds wake at sunrise in joyful jubilation
In joyful jubilation, loon’s song saved for night

– Clarence Holm

https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/08/17/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-58-rise-save/

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sumyanna | August 18, 2015 at 12:12 am

Beautiful!

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Prakash Hegade | August 18, 2015 at 1:29 am

such a lovely one.. 🙂

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- PrairieChat | August 18, 2015 at 4:30 am
  
  Thank you
  
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R. Todd | August 19, 2015 at 4:38 pm

A haiku about loons… me thinks mayhaps you should do a lune about loons. 🙂

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- PrairieChat | August 19, 2015 at 7:59 pm
  
  The duck stops here!
  
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  - R. Todd | August 19, 2015 at 8:33 pm
    
    I goose you’re right.
    
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  - PrairieChat | August 19, 2015 at 10:16 pm
    
    🙂
    
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