Morning Haiku 11/8/2015

"A Little Lonely" Original Acrylic Artwork By Stuart Glazer www.stuartglazer.com

“A Little Lonely”
Original Acrylic Artwork By Stuart Glazer
http://www.stuartglazer.com

cold morning moonlight
dispensed by the daybreak sky
I walk home alone

-Clarence Holm

The three lines can be read as two;

Cold morning moonlight dispensed by the daybreak sky
Dispensed by the daybreak sky, I walk home alone

4 thoughts on “Morning Haiku 11/8/2015

  1. Lovely! I prefer the three line version. If two lines, the occurrence of “dispensed by the daybreak sky” is repetitive. 😦

  2. Some would argue that a haiku is suppose to be read as two lines, with the middle line as the end of the first thought and the beginning of the second, and I think yours does that nicely.

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