“A Little Lonely”
Original Acrylic Artwork By Stuart Glazer
http://www.stuartglazer.com
cold morning moonlight
dispensed by the daybreak sky
I walk home alone-Clarence Holm
The three lines can be read as two;
Cold morning moonlight dispensed by the daybreak sky
Dispensed by the daybreak sky, I walk home alone
PrairieChat 
Lovely! I prefer the three line version. If two lines, the occurrence of “dispensed by the daybreak sky” is repetitive. 😦
I agree with you. I don’t know why I included the two line version, I normally just use that as a writing tool to force me to consider the break in thoughts!
Some would argue that a haiku is suppose to be read as two lines, with the middle line as the end of the first thought and the beginning of the second, and I think yours does that nicely.
Even more would argue that even getting one thought right is just as important.