RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #120 Heart & Petals

Image from Google, Words ©2016 – Clarence Holm
Petaline suitors
Quickly plucked from lonely heart
-Painful love me nots-Clarence Holm
RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #120 Heart & Petals
Image from Google, Words ©2016 – Clarence Holm
Petaline suitors
Quickly plucked from lonely heart
-Painful love me nots-Clarence Holm
Ahh! This is beautiful! Absolutely loved the last line.. 🙂
When I read the prompt words of “Petal and Heart” I immediately visualized rejected suitors as flower parts. The “nots”!
That was intelligent. The “nots” totally nails it!
I would like to say again, Brilliant Haiku! 🙂
This is a sweet haiku, soon flowers petals will be falling off here in my part of the country. I used to say, “He loves me, he loves me not. . .” nostalgic memories! 🙂
Nicely worked in there, well done.