Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge 1/9/2018 Destination & Guide – Synonyms Only
I chose Experience and Goals as my synonyms for Destination and guide
(Tanka Form 5-7-5 7-7)
“In Search of Sea Urchins” – Courtesy Stuart Glazer
http://www.stuartglazer.com
experience gives
what is required for life
your goal creates faterivers all flow end to end
you select currents you take-Clarence Holm
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Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 65: Destination & Guide (#SynonymsOnly)
The last two lines really make this poem a stand out. What a great message. I love it! <3
I had to correct the post, I copy and pasted the wrong draft.
No worries. <3
It’s beautiful, but not sure if we always can choose our currents to take. 😉
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Mmmm! I like this, you do pick your own path don’t you? A nice one.
Pat