Written on a winter walk-
shimmering branches
suspended from winter sky
squirrel tracks in rhyme~
melting april snow
tumbling from church gable
glisten on snowdrift~
fiery red dogwoods
floating in wind packed snow
hold a nibbled branch~
spring promise
by the frozen field
— bare lilacs~
cool white horizon
quivering in morning sun
capped by azure sky-cj holm
All of these are lovely. Great imagery and very “old school” Basho-like. Kudos.
I needed to get back to basics! Made a conscious effort to stick to images of what I saw, no interpretation.