Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge 189

first we pass gun laws
zen we take the machine guns
-automatic noise

-Clarence Holm

Sure I know “zen” technically doesn’t fit, but I have a poetic license to use it.

Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge 189 Zen / Noise

8 thoughts on “Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge 189”

Annette Rochelle Aben | February 19, 2018 at 11:05 am

boom

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ardputerbaughaolcom | February 19, 2018 at 11:35 am

Hit the target with this one. Awesome, clever, timely satire with a license!

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lynn__ | February 19, 2018 at 1:21 pm

Witty little ditty 😉

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- PrairieChat | February 20, 2018 at 3:41 am
  
  I couldn’t resist!
  
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D. Avery @shiftnshake | February 19, 2018 at 2:40 pm

What was the waiting period to get your poetic license?

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- PrairieChat | February 19, 2018 at 2:50 pm
  
  I had to attend years of sharp witting school, sponsored by the NPR.
  
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  - Tricia Drammeh | February 20, 2018 at 8:29 am
    
    And the winner of “best comment I’ve read this year” goes to…
pranabaxom | February 22, 2018 at 3:41 pm

You hit the nail on the head.

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