Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge 2/20/2018 breakthrough & movement – Synonyms Only
(Haika Form 5-7-5 7-7)
curtains moving in the frame
-runner leaves his base
frozen moment’s decision
of what will finish this play
Per Colleen’s Weekly Challenge, I chose shattered and leaves as my synonyms for breakthrough and movement
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 72:breakthrough & movement (#SynonymsOnly)
Are you a baseball lover? I had to read your Tanka a couple of times and then it hit me! You wrote the perfect baseball smashed window episode, ever! 😀 Well done.
I remembered a time when I was young playing baseball in our neighbors yard. We hit the ball through his window. I remember time stopped when it happened, then an explosion of kids running away. Course the people knew all of us, so we had to come back to face justice.
LOL! I knew it. 😂
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love it! wonderful!