I Write Her Weekly Haiku/Senryu Challenge #16
Susi Bocks Haiku/Senryu 5/7/5 Challenge
movement in the night
untouchable human form
pebbles tossed in pond
light bound in an earthly form
beats within a song
glimpse of pure beauty
that exist on natures edge
-meteors swift flight
I like the form of this, I hear, I feel, I see.
I enjoyed you incorporating these sense perspectives into these pieces, Clarence. Felt very substantive. Thank you!
It was the first time i tried to incorporate titles into Haiku – just something different
Good job! 🙂
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Really well done!