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Dance With Me

Created for Susi Bocks Challenge

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Here in this orchard
won’t you come to dance with me
and share my sweet fruit

                                              -CJ Holm

IWH weekly Haiku/Senryu Challenge 33 – August 20, 2019

I couldn’t resist adding some dream elements to the B & W image you (Susi) provided

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5 thoughts on “Dance With Me”

  1. CJ, I loved what you did to the image and the thoughts you’ve conveyed with your words are just lovely! Be careful, that second line though isn’t following the standard.

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  2. Pingback: I Write Her Weekly Haiku/Senryu Challenge #34 – I Write Her

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