Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge 305 Conflict / Gypsy
Gleaming gypsy gold
Nighttime dreams spun out of straw
-Light conflicts with stars
©2020 cj holm
Ronovan’s Haiku Challenge (5/11/20)
“Yes: I am a dreamer. For a dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.”
I like this very much. For some reason I thought of Rumplestiltskin.
I steal I mean borrow from the best
Yes, I can see the Rumplestiltskin idea, too. Love the first two lines.
Yes, I really was satisfied with the first two. I had trouble expressing choice with conflict in the last line. I remember the mysterious gypsies who came into my hometown and set up camp. We were told to stay away to protect ourselves! In the morning they were gone with no trace of them ever being there. It was a lot of mystery for a North Dakota farm boy to take in.
How about “Conflict left for day” instead…
Nice imagery, you whimsical manly man you.
Oh golly gee willikers!
Wow, this is amazing 😀