June 8, 2015 by PrairieChat ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-48-inspire-loss The Noble 600 He thought to inspire Alfred Lord sends the Brigade To suffer the loss https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/06/08/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-48-inspire-loss/ Share this:TwitterFacebookEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
Or maybe the better thought would be— He thought to inspire Tennyson sends the Brigade To suffer the loss Reply
PrairieChat 
Or maybe the better thought would be—
He thought to inspire
Tennyson sends the Brigade
To suffer the loss
Yes, the second one reads better. Nice!
…although it sounds rather unjust to poor Tennyson!
That’s why I initially held back the Sir Name
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