5 thoughts on “Beyond”

1. The addition of those last two lines to the traditional haiku added another layer. Lovely, CJ!

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2. Like the moon, your extended Haiku is fascinating.

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   • Thanks, It reminded me of an apartment I lived in with a window view of an air-shaft. Five stories of windows and brick walls topped by the light of the sky.

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3. Restless moment, endless sight is a great line.

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