Susi Bocks Haiku/Senryu 5/7/5 Challenge
Seen from my window
Bounded by four walls and sky
Moonlit moment’s flight
Captured for my dreams tonight
Restless moment, endless sight
I write her weekly Haiku/Senryu Challenge 21 – May 28, 2019
The addition of those last two lines to the traditional haiku added another layer. Lovely, CJ!
Like the moon, your extended Haiku is fascinating.
Thanks, It reminded me of an apartment I lived in with a window view of an air-shaft. Five stories of windows and brick walls topped by the light of the sky.
Restless moment, endless sight is a great line.
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